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Round 5
The dialogue in the beginning is from the prompt [link]
I wanted to include it, but credit goes to Shinko.
Cameos: :iconsongdog-strayfang: :icondannyhorserules: :iconstoriesofheroes: :iconmonkeym0o:
Hope I'm not forgetting anyone.
Feel free to critique anatomy/ backgrounds/ dialogue, etc.
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Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student Writer
I really think your backgrounds and artwork has improved so much from the beginning = D I am very interested to see what happens when she pays the Protes a visit...if they are even home D=

And thank you for the cameo!
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corvusraven Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2012  Student Filmographer
Aw thanks! I was hoping to improve.
No problem :)
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Canis-ferox Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student General Artist
This looks awesome so far c: And I think your dog drawing/anatomy's improved since the start of this; they all look great.
The only thing I'd point out is that, with the arrow directions, the speech bubbles at the beginning could be a bit confusing (as to who is talking) for someone not familiar with the prompt.
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corvusraven Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Student Filmographer
Awesome, I'm glad you think so :)
I just realized, I actually mixed up one of the speech bubbles D: I'll have to fix that on tuesday.
Thanks for letting me know!
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rexyplexy Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So it begins. Oh, Tyson, ever so friendly. :XD:.
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So it begiiiins~
Looking great this far! Looking forward to what you come up with. Untoten's got plans up her nonexistent sleeve~
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corvusraven Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Filmographer
A bit of a late start lol
Thanks :)
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Aeraya Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist
where going on an adventure Untoten!
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corvusraven Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Student Filmographer
yes lol
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DannyHorseRules Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist
AAHHHHH I'M JUST OVER HERE SQUEALING IN EXCITEMENT
This first part looks amazing!! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us, opponent~!
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