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I decided to put the comic together in flash this time. What do you think?
I figured out how to make line art better after I finished all the line art. So hopefully it looks better next time. Any advice you can give me on dog anatomy and perspective would be great! I really do need improvement.
This is my first time trying flash buttons, let me know if I messed anything up.
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rexyplexy Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool, how you did that! :D.
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thanks c:
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rexyplexy Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem!
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PapaPicosa Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very cool use of flash, an excellent idea to get long comics out there. Awesome job!
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thank you!
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Tephra76 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well done! :thumbsup:
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thanks :D
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Storiesofheroes Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2012
Jet: aw come on. You can't leave before all the fun starts. ;)
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Canis-ferox Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student General Artist
I very much love this new medium 8} Like Songdog said, there's no problem with wandering-eye spoilers, haha. Plus it's like a hybrid between comic and storyboard sort of, because of the way things/characters move as you go panel to panel. Works really well with the dialogue too; it feels much less static than dialogue in a regular comic would.
And I saw a Spoondog in the first panel :la:
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Yeah, I was thinking storyboard/animatic type thing. Yes, the way I can move dialogue around is one of my favorite parts of this flash medium c:
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Songdog-StrayFang Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Dude this was awesome. The new medium you're working with was really neat to see, since your stuck looking at only one part at a time and your eyes never stray to spoil something for you (or maybe this is just a problem I have because I'm crazy) The backgrounds looked really nice, and I think this new twist in the plot will be exciting to see, definitely a nice push. I knew I recognized the two dogs when I saw them!

And because you're the second to submit following my offer, I'll make a sketch of Untoten as well. Best of luck to you comrade!
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thanks! I have that same problem with the spoilers too actually xD I really liked working with flash, it seems so much more organised than my comic panels, even though its simpler. Glad you liked it :D
Thank you for the sketch ^^
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fluffyz Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
Oh you did very very good! I like that you are using the flash format. I saw no problems with the buttons. You did very well! It pleases me~

And you always find out how to do things better after you finish xD
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Thanks! Glad it worked ok. I won this time technology..
I know, right?
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AlfaFilly Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Gasp! Decisions, decisions! Whatever shall she do? D: I am curious if the assistant is going to tell Beyra, and how Beyra will react.
And Caesar amuses me how he's in the emo corner all alone haha xD

And this was a really nifty part! The flash comic was an excellent idea~
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Filmographer
I am glad you are interested in my entry (:
Thank you!
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Cloudbat Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I foresee no problems with this plan!
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Hehe we'll see...
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Shinkoryu14 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Always fun to see folks experimenting with new mediums!

Oh dear, looks like some puppies are being naughty. Tsk tsk.
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CorvusRaven Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Filmographer
It was a nice change of pace to go with this medium :) I think I'll stick with it a little longer.
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